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Saturday, October 27, 2007
Survey says...
Requesting feedback may help create a more modest tone and offset the negative effect of
pronouns
.
For example,
"I would like to remove the rich media from the home page so it loads faster."
becomes...
"I would like to remove the rich media from the homepage so it loads faster. What do you think?"
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December 26, 2007 at 1:28 PM
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Technical Writing Style
William Zinsser
Strunk and White
Writing Style by George Orwell (1903 - 1950)
Raphael A. Finkel, University of Kentucky
UNC Style Guide
The Handbook of Technical Writing, Eighth Edition
Deadwood Phrases
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Technical + Tactful
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