Avoiding "aware" and "awareness" can make readers feel more comfortable.
For example,
"I’m very aware how important this is."
becomes...
"This is a very high priority. "
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"I don't think you're aware how important this project is. "
becomes...
"In my opinion, this project needs to be made a high priority."
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