Sunday, November 4, 2007

Aware's a Bear

Avoiding "aware" and "awareness" can make readers feel more comfortable.




For example,

"I’m very aware how important this is."

becomes...

"This is a very high priority. "

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"I don't think you're aware how important this project is. "

becomes...

"In my opinion, this project needs to be made a high priority."

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